from CADENCE

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12.32am's picture

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another incredible poem from one of Grateful Web's contributors. look to the Connecticut Theory for further literary greatness from Ms. Crocker. http://www.gratefulweb.net/gwebNews/gwebDesign/viewerTales.asp?articleid...

Jamba - SugarFly- Dunn's picture

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Open windows are no substitute for good ventilation. Given the same temperature some prose will stifle and sweat by an open window of a poorly ventilated poem. Crocker keeps it breezy even with the window closed. She gives her characters plenty of air, delivered in just the right way for coolness and comfort. She insures healthy language and keeps production well above the neck of digital madness. From Cadence is weatherproof when closed and weather protecting when intercepted. The language is fireproof and indestructible: A voice detached, wandering into the wet woods and up the mountains on stormy nights; a barren bus line over a dangerous icy adjective.